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Sleeping Snow, Dreaming Snow
03:36:29 PM 03/17/17 »
I walk naked through the white woods. The snow is blowing all around me, but I do not freeze. I see a raven tearing into the corpse of something. There is blood in the snow.The raven flies into the air and lands on my shoulder, the talons dig into my skin. I bleed. The raven tells me to open my mouth. I do and it feeds me, shares it's prey with me. I walk. I reach a cottage. Seven strange and deformed little creatures come up to me and lead me inside the cottage. There is snow inside. In the middle of the room stands a bed. A woman lies upon it, naked, sleeping. She is beautiful. Her skin is whiter than the snow, long hair like flowing night and her lips redder than blood. I need her. The seven, tiny monsters urge me to go to her, to kiss her, to taste her, to feel her. I do. She awakens and kisses me back. Her lips taste of blood and-
Leila slowly returned to reality, blurry eyed and hungover. "Where the fuck am I?" she mumbled to herself before her sight readjusted to waking life and saw the the moldy shithole she and her band knew as the rehearsal space.
She had been sleeping in the ancient pile of fabric that had once been a sofa. She saw that Rick - the drummer - had chosen a more comfortable and less disgusting place for rest: On the floor, in his own vomit.
Leila slowly sat up, trying to ignore the vertigo. Having won the first battle of the day she got to the second one of waking her drummer
"Riiiiick" her normally beautiful voice came out as thin, whiny croak. It hurt. The drummer was still comfortably passed out.
"Riiiiick!" She tried louder this time, still no sign of life in the drummer. "Fuck, are you dead?"
It was a sobering thought. Leila got up on her feet and shook the drummer awake. It seemed to be working.
"...mmmm... wwwwhat?" He awoke with a start. "What!? Leila... where are we?"
"Rehearsal. Do you have any memory of what happened yesterday?"
"We played at... ummm... Lucky's? I think it was Lucky's. And then-"
"We got absolutely, hilariously, shitfaced. I noticed."
Rick noticed his choice of pillow and with disgust went to wash his face and get a mop.
Leila pulled out a chair and sat down, still being a bit too hungover to think straight.
She heard Rick shout in surprise from the bathroom.
"Are you ok?" she croaked as loudly as possible to get through the sound isolation, which wasn't hard, whoever had done the sound isolation had done a shit job.
"Yes, it was... it was nothing. Just got spooked by my own reflection" came the reply.
"Hah!... what the fuck did you take last night?"
Rick returned to the room with a mop "Shut up."
An awkward silence fell over the room while Rick mopped up the lost contents of his stomach.
"Hey, Rick... weird question... did you dream?"
"Yep, fucked a hot brunette in the snow, you?"
"... yeah, pretty much that..."
The realization that they had the same dream slowly sunk into both of them. Rick mopped up the remaining vomit.
"So, Lala, want to get a hamburger or something? I'm hungry."
"Don't call me that and yes, burger sounds nice."
Wayback-Burger was a smaller, family owned place. It was decorated in a manner to invoke anachronistic nostalgia. Pictures of Marilyn Monroe and James Dean mixed with pictures of The Beatles and David Bowie. The soundtrack could go from Elvis, to Black Sabbath, to Frank Sinatra, somehow seamlessly. The food was real, not the vapid crap the fast food joints served, no. The burgers were so overstuffed they had a stick through them, the meat was made from meat, real, proper beef and not dog food disguised as food for humans.
Rick had ordered three burgers, a whole plate of thick, delicious fries, spicy chicken wings and a large strawberry milkshake.
Leila was staring at him from across the table? "What?" he mumbled, his mouth stuffed "I'm a drummer, I just threw up, I need the fucking energy."
She rolled her eyes and bit into her hamburger. "mmmm... heaven between two buns..."
Rick stared at her.
"... not a word."
He went back to his burgers.
Leila bit into her giant cheeseburger and looked out the shop window. She saw an empty, cobbled street, a naked brick wall covered in obscenities to hide the obscenity of its nakedness, like waking up and finding that someone had fixed your makeup and then drawn dicks all over your breasts. The snow danced gently towards the ground, longing to cover the streets, to be stepped on, to be dirtied and to finally - melt.
Staring at the white snow Leila almost saw her own reflection morph into, or possibly blend with the features of the woman from the dream. Her shoulder length, purple hair turning long and ashen like ropes or black snakes, her freckled face turning perfectly porcelain.
The illusion however was broken and replaced with another, of a tiny, cloaked figure hobbling over the street. The prints it left looked more like twisted hooves than feet. As the Dwarf walked past the window Leila met its only eye it tried to hide under the hood.
She snapped out of the trance. There was nothing inside the window, there was nothing outside the window, it was all images floating in her eyes.
"Are you alright?" Rick asked, concerned. He was two thirds through his meal.
"Yeah I'm just..." she trailed off and rubbed her eyelids.
"Whatever it is I hope we'll get some lyrics out of it."
"It's not my fault I'm the only one in the band who is somewhat literate" she shot back, without thinking.
"Woooooow, true, but where did that come from?"
"Sorry... I'll... I'll try to call the others. Have you gotten anything?"
"Nope, no texts at all, no idea where they might be."
Leila took her phone out of her pocket and called Tom, the guitarist. She was met with a blistering guitar lick and his cocky voice saying
"Sorry, can't answer now, busy being awesome, leave a message after the beep" another guitar lick, beep.
They both rolled their eyes and neither of them said "I hate his answering machine", they didn't need to.
They had even less luck with Logan, the bassist who didn't even have an answering machine.
"Maybe they got even more hilariously shitfaced than we did?" Rick said and failed to defuse the tension.
"Have you ever seen Logan seriously drunk? He could chug an entire barrel of scotch and still be able to walk in a slightly curved line" Leila countered.
Rick was silent.
"I'll go home, get some more sleep, see you later."
"Sure, sleep sounds like a good idea."
Oh how I shiver as she rakes me with her claws, how sweet the taste of the blood that runs from her lips, how I melt as her fingers hook my insides, how I howl as she claws out my heart.
Leila was sure she wouldn't have been able to fall asleep when she got home, but lo and behold! She had fallen asleep, still dressed. She swore at her mistake, her underwear ruined by her dreams. As she undressed and opened her wardrobe she decided that they wouldn't be worth saving and threw them in the trash.
She looked out the window as she got redressed. The moon hung full and pale in the night sky, like Snow White's face in the dark hair. "Fuck..." she swore again, to herself again "I really need to get laid."
There was a bustle in the hedgerow below her window, she didn't know how she heard it, but she did. She walked over to the window and saw 7 cloaked little figures staring at her from below.
"Do I look like a fucking prince?" she shouted at them. The Dwarfs either did not hear her, or they did not care. They kept staring at her, unmoving.
She sighed and muttered "Fine, no reason fighting Fate when Fate has made up its mind."
Leila grabbed her winter coat and walked down the apartment stairs, she was almost surprised to find the Dwarfs still standing where she had last seen them.
"OK" she said "lead me to Her, I'm ready."
The figures started hobbling away in single file, snarling an off-beat tune in perfect synchronization to their shuffling, but one Leila found it impossible to find the rhythm to. Every time she thought she had it, it changed, or was lost, or she never found it in the first place.
The wind picked up the further the Dwarfs led her and soon turned into a blistering blizzard, blowing through her coat. Leila found that even if she was freezing she didn't really care.
She was lost, this confounded her. The town was small, but she had no idea where she was. The blizzard obscuring every noticeable landmark.
They stopped in front of an abandoned warehouse. Dwarfs disrobed and led her inside.
They were all angular things, like a cubists nightmare with the wrong number of misshapen everythings. Too few eyes, too many mouths. Too many noses, too few ears. Everything in the wrong places.
The warehouse was full of snow, snow and frozen figures lying dead and naked on the floor. Leila recognized her band mates among them and chuckled. All that worrying for nothing.
Snow White laid in an ornamented bed in the middle of the room. Her hair so black the darkness seemed pale, her skin so white the snow seemed dark, her red lips full like a juicy heart. The peaks of her breasts rising and falling as she slowly breathed.
Leila undressed with the Dwarves watching in silence. She shuddered, not at the cold, it did not bother her anymore, but in anticipation. She walked across the snow covered floor towards the bed and watched the sleeping beauty, then she bent down to kiss the princess awake and doomed the world.
Sleeping Snow, Dreaming Snow
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