Author Topic: Fleming Storage Unit #35--Salient Specimens (WIP)  (Read 3816 times)

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on: 11:30 AM, 11/22/17
I've been thinking about the length of this story, and it is quite long, but I wouldn't cut anything out. Everything feels like it needs to be there to me, like if you took some parts out it would make a difference you know?
I don't know how to express this clearly... some stories are ment to be this long, and others could delete so many things, but this one would be missing if you did.
If the contest hadn't established the number of pages, you could go even further with the narrators thougths and it would make the story even more interesting, at least for me :)



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on: 02:24 PM, 11/22/17
As far as other work goes (begin shameless plugs) you can wander through my Goodreads for more information, or check out a little narration I did of one on Youtube. There are links to both in my profile here.
Definitely checking that out. I did a youtube reading of my own work, too, called The Laughing Desert.



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on: 04:47 PM, 11/22/17
Definitely checking that out. I did a youtube reading of my own work, too, called The Laughing Desert.

really?? I'll check it out too



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on: 06:57 AM, 11/26/17
New draft added with Nov. 26 edits.
Much the same, just with a few different flavors.

I think this is probably as close to a final draft as I'm gonna get without starting from Square One...now I just need to squash all the little spot fixes like punctuation and whatnot.
Nightmares can be such flimsy things with such voracious appetites. Turn them away once and they can starve.



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on: 07:48 AM, 11/30/17
Well...I bit the bullet and submitted my story for reading. I threw the final version up as an attachment at the top of this thread, too.

Thanks mikemacdee, and TataSantec, and everyone else who have helped me clean up my mess.
(why does this sound like a suicide note?)

Anyway, I fully intend to make TooSpooky my new, weird, internet home. Hope to see you all around.
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on: 03:27 PM, 12/ 1/17
Well...I bit the bullet and submitted my story for reading. I threw the final version up as an attachment at the top of this thread, too.

Thanks mikemacdee, and TataSantec, and everyone else who have helped me clean up my mess.
(why does this sound like a suicide note?)

Anyway, I fully intend to make TooSpooky my new, weird, internet home. Hope to see you all around.

thank you for helping me so much as well, specially with the english xD