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« on: 06:08:59 PM 05/01/16 »
This is just a little form for a idea on a villain so I can make it Non-Clichéd so I want your opinions on it I can handle the harshest of stuff so lemme have it!:



Name: The 'Shusher'



Age: ???



Gender: Possibly Male



Appearance: a somewhat tall man ((around 6'6 6'5)) bulky and has some masculinity "The Shusher" wears a dark green raincoat that goes down do his knee's it's made of a older material seems like rubber or cloth it has white buttons that go from the groin too below is neck on the raincoat he wears thick waterproof pants that are dark brown and ripped a little he has brown muddy workbooks on with thick black gloves on his face is a dark green S-10 soviet gasmask with lenses that are clouded and a wheezing sound can be heard from the filter.




Personality: Utterly Mute and maybe deaf he has a straight slow posture when he walks and his arms keep at his sides he has no signs of rage or anger when he walks he mostly stares at people and just stands there...




Weapons: He uses the means of strangling as a weapon and or a pickaxe if he's feeling gruesome.




Trademark: His trademark is the "Shush" sign like a librarian or a teacher would use in class but there is no "Ssssh" after it since he's silent he bends down all the way into someone's face do to this.



Powers: He is totally immune to physical harm and pain bullets put holes in him but he seems to be unaffected fists do nothing and melee weapons will just break over his body no matter what the material is...he can destroy a persons mental psych very quickly if stared at for a while he has been known to put more people in the looney bin than killing them outright.




Strategy: He tries to attack people in there most venerable state ((In there sleep or if there totally paranoid)) if this doesn't work he will wait until the victim becomes mentally unstable and try to attack from there.
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« Reply #1 on: 06:53:15 PM 05/01/16 »

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Somewhere between communism and surrealism.

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« Reply #2 on: 07:34:42 PM 05/03/16 »
Can't see the photo.
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« Reply #3 on: 10:33:17 PM 05/03/16 »
Can't see the photo.
oh, sorry, it's a photo of the bogeyman (I know, stupid name) from Silent Hill: Downpour. The design of this character reminds me quite a lot of his appearance in the game, and concerning the psychological elements you describe for The Shusher, it reminds me of the game itself.

That, of course, is not an immediate condemnation of your character. If he is integrated well into the story proper, then I think it doesn't matter what he resembles visually. I was really just trying to make you aware of the similarities between your character and the one from the photo above.
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« Reply #4 on: 06:17:13 PM 05/11/16 »
oh, sorry, it's a photo of the bogeyman (I know, stupid name) from Silent Hill: Downpour. The design of this character reminds me quite a lot of his appearance in the game, and concerning the psychological elements you describe for The Shusher, it reminds me of the game itself.

That, of course, is not an immediate condemnation of your character. If he is integrated well into the story proper, then I think it doesn't matter what he resembles visually. I was really just trying to make you aware of the similarities between your character and the one from the photo above.

I don't know if you're active right now or not but I did actually get this idea from resident evil ((if you played RE:5 the first boss in the rally area is what I got this concept from and my bloody valentine.))

so I made a few sketches and BAM! here he is I was thinking making him more aggressive and gruesome looking but that was "clichéd" in my opinion so...I made him not so gory looking and decided to keep away from a fast aggressive nature and kind of made him calm and laid back in ways keeping a straight almost gentleman's posture and almost militaristic and the overlonged psyched destroying stare did come from silent hill ((pyramid head)) but not all the way.
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