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Your Stories / My Love For You
« on: 10:43 PM, 03/23/19 »
My love for you is like a cup of tea, filling you with pleasant warmth.

My love for you is like a faithful dog, always by your side.

My love for you is like a sapling, growing with every second of every day.

My love for you is like the vastness of space, never ending and without limits.

My love for you is like a crutch,  there for you to support yourself with.

My love for you is like an art gallery, full of interesting pieces for you to discover, if you just gave it a chance.

My love for you is like a good song, something to get lost in.

My love for you is like a suit of armor, protecting you from the harshness of the world.

My love for you is like chocolate, a delectable treat to indulge in any time you wish.

My love for you is like a firework, beautiful and bright, it lights up the night sky.

My love for you is like the ocean, far more vast than anyone could even fathom.

My love for you is like a fast food chain, you can find it everywhere you go.

My love for you is like a run on sentence going on and on to keep you entertained no matter how embarrassing it may be.

My love for you is like coffee, warm and energizing.

My love for you is like meat, tasty and easy to sink your teeth into.

My love for you is like a soft kiss, you can feel it on your face.

My live for you is like dewdrops, clinging to what they care about despite the challenges ahead.

My love for you is like the blood in your veins, it flows through you into every piece of your being.

My love for you is like a tapeworm, deep inside of you at all times.

My love for you is like dust,  it permeates every inch of your home, no matter what you do.

My love for you is like a massive stain, impossible to remove or ignore.

My love for you is like a flame, all consuming.

My love for you is like your home, easy to enter and explore.

My love for you is like a pale hand,  you feel it on you at the dead of night.

My love for you is like the heat death of the universe, completely inescapable.

My love for you is like a wounded child, full of soft meat for you to devour.

My love for you is like the government, always watching  to ensure you stay safe.

My live for you is tender

My love for you is warm

My love for you is inescapable.

Soon, I will share it with you.





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 Do all the stories show up onto the front page, or did I do something in settings to get it there?  The story needs some work, so if I can undo that somehow  that would be nice.

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Story Critique / Nonlinear
« on: 10:48 PM, 03/19/19 »
(So I don't really know if its OK to post the same story to multiple boards, so if it isn't tell me and ill take this down.)

“Let's review what happened yesterday, and see if we can put the pieces back together”

Letting out a slow yawn, I start to wake up.

“No, I'm pretty sure I'm you from five minutes ago.”

Something felt off, I thought to myself

“Why do you feel strange?”

Rolling down the stairs, I land face first onto the  concrete.

Slowly, I open my eyes.

“You sure?”

“I feel strange”

My eyes drifted to the alarm clock, and I did a double take.

“Okay, let's try that. Not like we have much to lose.”

I spring out of bed, rapidly getting dressed and running out the door.

Something was…off…

“I don't know man, I thought you would know what to do!”

What year is it?

 It was one PM!

“oh, shit.”

As I'm going down the front steps, I slip on a patch of ice.

 I scrabble to my feet, and get into the car,

 “Why would I know what to do?”

My boss was pissed, as expected.

I kill a few hours of my life at work, and head back home.

“...Yes, That IS strange, isn't it?”

“Okay, I have an idea.”

“Something has gone wrong with time.”

The fall had knocked the wind out of me.

After watching some TV, I fall asleep.

“What's the idea?”

“Aren't you me from the future? I thought we would have worked this all out by then.”

“Well, what should we do?”

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Your Stories / Nonlinear
« on: 10:41 PM, 03/19/19 »
“Let's review what happened yesterday, and see if we can put the pieces back together”

Letting out a slow yawn, I start to wake up.

“No, I'm pretty sure I'm you from five minutes ago.”

Something felt off, I thought to myself

“Why do you feel strange?”

Rolling down the stairs, I land face first onto the  concrete.

Slowly, I open my eyes.

“You sure?”

“I feel strange”

My eyes drifted to the alarm clock, and I did a double take.

“Okay, let's try that. Not like we have much to lose.”

I spring out of bed, rapidly getting dressed and running out the door.

Something was…off…

“I don't know man, I thought you would know what to do!”

What year is it?

 It was one PM!

“oh, shit.”

As I'm going down the front steps, I slip on a patch of ice.

 I scrabble to my feet, and get into the car,

 “Why would I know what to do?”

My boss was pissed, as expected.

I kill a few hours of my life at work, and head back home.

“...Yes, That IS strange, isn't it?”

“Okay, I have an idea.”

“Something has gone wrong with time.”

The fall had knocked the wind out of me.

After watching some TV, I fall asleep.

“What's the idea?”

“Aren't you me from the future? I thought we would have worked this all out by then.”

“Well, what should we do?”

“I don't know”

“Did it work? Did we fix time?”

“Seems like we did!”

“Great! Now If we can get out of here, we can-”

“What's the idea?”



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